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Isolated I
Build walls around my words
Word-walls around my worlds
Shave off sharp edges
Blunt broken-glass glaciers
Compact, confine, conglomerate
The five in one, the whole wide array
Of thought, behaviour, movement
Into the box of 'normal'
Re-channel, restructure, move maddening impulse
To accepted acceptable action
Break pattern stride shape form
Snap string mid-sentence
Reject repetition, reject rocking, reject unreal reality
Re-shape in readable readiness
For quashing quick-draw question
Silencing scepticism, attacking assumption
But home, here, hearthfire
Here, isolation is intention, internal instinct.
Understood, unquestioned, unattacked.
Isolated, I am
Accepted

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This is what happens when I am too zonked to run the 'normal' subroutines on my brain. You get random freeverse about being on the autistic spectrum. Well good XD

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:iconthecrazymagnet:
Wow. You are clearly the king of alliteration, and it almost feels like that's the whole point. When I read this, I feel confused, but also very okay with being confused. Lovely work.
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*GentlemanAnachronism Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for commenting, and I'm glad you like the poem :)

Being confused by it is pretty much standard, I think - there're a tonne of references in there which are personal, and a tonne more which only work if your brain works in a similar way to mine - but I'm glad it works in spite of that.
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:iconthecrazymagnet:
That makes sense. It feels like a window into a world I wish I understood. (Not as good as your alliterations, but I'm working on it!) :)
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=IllustratedJai Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*hug* Is good. Is very very very very good. But I cannot brain, so remind me to reread this later, when I can.
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*GentlemanAnachronism Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*hugshugs* <3
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