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Dear Mother and Father-
No, too formal. He'd never called them that in his life, and now really wasn't the time to start.
Dear Mum and Dad,
Much better.
Am off to seek my fortune. If not back in five years, assume am either dead or wildly successful. If wildly successful, will buy you a castle. And a herd of those big black cattle from over the valley, the ones which make the best milk and have meat that tastes fit for royalty.
Please don't worry too much about me. Have asked a lad from Oldbrook's farm to come and help you with milking, so you won't miss me too much in the barn, and I've mended the gate on the bottom field. Jon Tanner says he can help with slaughtering when the time comes, long as he can get a churn of milk to take home for his bairns.
Much love
Your son
Caleb
He bit his lip, reading back over the last two lines. He could still change them. Cross them out, pretend he'd never written 'em in the first place. Pretend it'd always said what his parents were expecting it to say.
But he wasn't their daughter. And while Katrin was a fine name, it wasn't his. And dammit, if he was going off to seek his fortune, he wasn't doing it under false pretences.
They'd understand. They were good people, after all. A bit preoccupied with the farm right now - always had been, if he was honest - but good people. And it wasn't as though they'd treated his brothers any different from him anyway.
No. Everything was going to be fine.
He was the youngest of seven sons, he was heading off to seek his fortune - it pretty much had to be fine.
He placed the letter carefully on the corner of the big wooden kitchen table, weighed it down with an earthenware jug so it'd not get blown away, and, picking up his pack from the corner by the hearth, headed outside.
The wind was picking up now, sending waves rippling across the corn in Oldbrook's fields and making the trees on the hilltop dance and sway in the midday sun. The white ribbon of the farm track zigagged up through the green of the hill, as it always had done, but today it seemed almost to shimmer - a stream of silver, cutting through emerald grass and golden corn up to the sapphire blue of the sky.
Carefully, calmly, he locked the door.
Then he grinned, settled his pack firmly on his shoulders, and began to walk.
The breeze ruffled his hair, the warm sun caressed his skin, and the birds calling in the trees sounded for all the world like, in this moment, they were singing just for him.
It was, in other words, the perfect day to start an adventure.
No, too formal. He'd never called them that in his life, and now really wasn't the time to start.
Dear Mum and Dad,
Much better.
Am off to seek my fortune. If not back in five years, assume am either dead or wildly successful. If wildly successful, will buy you a castle. And a herd of those big black cattle from over the valley, the ones which make the best milk and have meat that tastes fit for royalty.
Please don't worry too much about me. Have asked a lad from Oldbrook's farm to come and help you with milking, so you won't miss me too much in the barn, and I've mended the gate on the bottom field. Jon Tanner says he can help with slaughtering when the time comes, long as he can get a churn of milk to take home for his bairns.
Much love
Your son
Caleb
He bit his lip, reading back over the last two lines. He could still change them. Cross them out, pretend he'd never written 'em in the first place. Pretend it'd always said what his parents were expecting it to say.
But he wasn't their daughter. And while Katrin was a fine name, it wasn't his. And dammit, if he was going off to seek his fortune, he wasn't doing it under false pretences.
They'd understand. They were good people, after all. A bit preoccupied with the farm right now - always had been, if he was honest - but good people. And it wasn't as though they'd treated his brothers any different from him anyway.
No. Everything was going to be fine.
He was the youngest of seven sons, he was heading off to seek his fortune - it pretty much had to be fine.
He placed the letter carefully on the corner of the big wooden kitchen table, weighed it down with an earthenware jug so it'd not get blown away, and, picking up his pack from the corner by the hearth, headed outside.
The wind was picking up now, sending waves rippling across the corn in Oldbrook's fields and making the trees on the hilltop dance and sway in the midday sun. The white ribbon of the farm track zigagged up through the green of the hill, as it always had done, but today it seemed almost to shimmer - a stream of silver, cutting through emerald grass and golden corn up to the sapphire blue of the sky.
Carefully, calmly, he locked the door.
Then he grinned, settled his pack firmly on his shoulders, and began to walk.
The breeze ruffled his hair, the warm sun caressed his skin, and the birds calling in the trees sounded for all the world like, in this moment, they were singing just for him.
It was, in other words, the perfect day to start an adventure.
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and even so, you stayed
I taste rain on your lips
and I know you’ve been
writing poetry again.
I breathe into the touch
of your fingers
cascading in a soft scale
down the cage of bones
around my heartbeat.
you kiss me
knowing
the colors that drift
in my mind
like water beneath
all the bridges that were
burned for me
and you stay.
Literature
twenty / something
growing up means :
bird metaphors are becoming trite / i must no longer write
about leaving the nest but decide where i can find a place to build.
like this we all pay our rents. i think about Franklin and his taxes
/ skull collector / his eventual place in the dirt / a nest of paper : currency
of misappropriated quotes.
i return home / find my poster of Che folded into tablecloth /
critical theory textbooks mothballed into the ivory of closet.
/ by home : i mean nest / or conjugal remembrance.
when i dream anymore, it’s about equity / fringe benefi
Literature
scattered
We leave pieces of ourselves in the corners
Of bookshelves, stuck between the pages
And in the hand painted wooden bowl
Collecting dust and spare change.
My fingers grazed a fragment
When I saw a photograph of you today
And my lungs caught on the memory
Of the first words you said to me
Lingering like a ghost breath
In the soft curve of my earlobe.
(“Hi, mind if I ask you
Some questions?”)
I hid inside the rain to drown out
The sound. The wet grass stuck to my toes
And the droplets rolled down
Over the shirt that my mom told me
Makes me look like I’ve got a chip on my shoulder.
(She thought her rebel was a princess
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Assuming I get my brain in gear, this will be an actual novel-length work. As it is, it's a scene I wanted to get down on paper before I forgot it.
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Chapter 1: gentlemananachronism.deviantar…
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Oh, yessss, I am so glad there is a Chapter 1.